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Post by Tom on Fri Jul 17, 2009 2:01 pm

this is something that i wrote a few months ago, it talks about me family and all the important things from this world that surround me. these are just the lyrics but i've been working on it, finally i came up with a nice melody. As soon as i'm done with it i'll record meself so you people can hear it.

Critics are welcome no hard feelings

Cheers.

you make believe that i'm still alive
even when my heart stops beating
look at the monument that you've created
It's not some sort of a joke, it is the creation of the century
you always make me think that i'm valuable enough
the confrontations that we've been through are now just laughing memories in between me and you

Let's forget the past and let the water flow
our mysteries will never be revealed to the bright sunshine
the softness of your screams might make me feel pity
but the emotions on my heart could make you feel relieved
you make me believe that i'm still alive
I'm glad that i have the chance to walk one more time

Tomorrow will be another day
a place where our kingdom will finally become a place of only entertainment and expectations
sure thing that our dreams will be vanished by the morning
but it doesn't really matter
we have to keep on going
We've all become one.
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Post by bremex on Fri Jul 17, 2009 2:20 pm

point point point point
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Post by Stayb on Fri Jul 17, 2009 4:54 pm

bremex wrote:point point point point

Pointy is mine. MINE I TELLS YA!

Good stuff though tom! point

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Post by Tom on Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:52 pm

Massive Very Happy
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Post by Elsa™ on Mon Jul 27, 2009 4:12 pm

Nice one Tom Cool
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Post by lennonrules on Sun Jan 23, 2011 10:19 am

good work tom.
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